ratchili's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Mezhar]

Beautiful piece.

It is so well put together, giving the beast this quiet, lurking, yet horrid and murderous personality. The lighting and setting really creates this dark and grim atmosphere that leaves so much to the imagination. It feels so real and I love it. The birds were a nice tough too.

Guess the only issue I really see in the piece is that the scythe on the right statue is slightly transparent. I don't know if this is intentional, but it doesn't look right. But even then, it took some real searching to find it.

In short, this piece fucking rocks, dude.

Xephio responds:

Huh, didnt notice that scythe. Its actually not transparent but looks like it because of the white highlight lines of his claw going over the scythe. Mustve forgotten to clean it up :)
Thanks mate

[Plum | Bravest Warriors]

Not bad, but the shading and anatomy need work. Plum's lower half seem too big for her body, in both lengh and width. Her hair is shaded oddly too, in a way that makes the hair seem too solid and shiny. Like plastic-y, Iguess. Again, not too bad though. You did a great job with the color choice and made a great and interesting pose for Plum.

Also Bravest Warriors fuckyeah!

[sci fi knight]

Goddamn, this is really good. It's got this cool sketchy texture that suits the sharper art style very well, and the color choices are excellent. Can't actually find much to critique on, besides I feel the robotic thingy behind the dudes arm seems a little too smooth. But even that might just be me.

Hella awesome work you got there.

zattdott responds:

thanks!! you are right about the robotic thingy... im just too lazy to fix it now XP

[The Anti-Showcase]

The shading (although a little messy) and composition are great, but the vomit itself looks a little off. It looks too '2D' and doesn't appear to be going any clear direction, which is a problem with the vomit is a big part of the piece. Perhaps some more three-dimensional shading would help this, along with a little more of a pained and drunken expression from the man's face to make it seem that he is currently and lively vomiting, that or at least have him bend forward a bit more to appear as though he is bending himself to aim the already exploding puke bomb. The words inside of it were a cool, creative touch, but again, didn't really fit well with the piece's existing style. Just a bit more improvement, and this piece could be a masterpiece.

KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK, FRIEND!

SuperBastard responds:

Thanks for the review dude!
I stuck the words in the vomit because that's the title of the event the poster is advertising, and I didn't want to put too much detail into the puke because I might lose what little readability the words have.
You're totally right about the lack of direction though, it seems to be just kind of coming out and not really PROJECTILING like it could be. I could have pushed the expression more too.
Good thoughts!

[Star Wars Epic Battle]

That is the cutest goddamn rampage I've ever seen.

icheban responds:

Hahaha thanks

[Fishing for that bass...guitar]

The art is very recycled in the comic and the joke's already a couple years old. The art itself though looks pretty good.

[BL Enforcer]

The color and detail is outstanding, only thing is that the background seems a little too "brushy" and fake Iguess. It feels too different from the highly detailed soldier standing on it.

bologen111 responds:

look at now

[Iron Surge]

Holy shit, that thing's really cool. Diggin' the contrast between the blues and the dark background, but the background itself feels a little blank. That's some really good fucking coloring though.

Te3Time responds:

Yeah I got really quite tired and didn't know what to do with the bg but thanks a lot :)

[Pearl QT]

This kicks butt!

The color and style is great. Only complaint is that, as good as the coloring on the hair looks, it fades out without an outline which doesn't really look as fitting with everything else.

Besides that, fuckyeah.

[Ninja Brian Fanart (Ninja Sex Party)]

You've perfectly captured Ninja Brian's death stare of death.

Bravo.

Yoshiko-Animation responds:

hahaha xD thank you